August 4, 2008Ravenous - Chapter 2_A Deadly Secret"What?" "Ronnie told me his secret! Guess What? They're vampires!" I just stared at her blankly. Huh? We are absolutely obessed with vampires.But even though I wish all the time that they really existed. I always thought that they wern't real, no matter how much I believe that anything's possible. Like how my sister is making about 50 bucks in 2 days with her new job! "Wait, what? Who?" I always get so confused. Stupid brain! Always making it harder for me to understand things and giving me memory loss! "Ronnie, Max, Robert Ortiz, Omar Espinosa, Bryan Monte, and Craig Mabbit!" I stare at her in disbelief. She's making no sense at all to me. "Well, first off, this ia a long story and since you can hardly speak, niether could I when Ronnnie told me, I'm just going to tell........" So, She told me everything, all about how they've been this way for decades. Ronnie and Max had started the goup, after both of them were seduced by two female vampires almost 50 years ago. They had decided that they do want to be immortal and talked to a friend about what had happened. That was Robert. Robert was facinated by the theory of immortality and wished to become one of them. Ronnie did the honors. Not too long after, they came across Omar who aslo had been bitten and then Bryan. Both seduced by the same "women." None of them had ever seen the two female vampires after that. About 20 years later, they went to the school that Craig was enrolled in. Craig always felt that they were not normal. he stalked the group and found out their secret. After that, Craig begged to become one of them but Ronnie denied the plea. Craig although knew their secret and threatened to tell. Max liked the way it was and didnt want to take the risk, so, Ronnie shot his vemon into Craigs neck with a bite. When it came to blood, they were always humane about it. Not hurting people or animals. They stole bags of blood from the hospitals. Craig didn't like the idea and felt it was more fun to feed off of, killing thousands. The group dislliked that and felt it was better to let Craig go. So, Ronnie disowned Craigs name and sent him away. Although, Craig didnt leave. He's been following the group ever since that day, wanting to take revenge on Ronnie, to someday take his place.
"Wow........wait! Does he still feed off of victims!" I had a horrified look on my face! I don't want to die! But I do want to be a vampire. But not by Craig! Uhh then I'd be bound to him forever and he looks like a rabbit! Val had said that a not too long ago. And well, it's true, he does! "Um well I didn't get every detail. But I'm sure we can talk to them all tommorow." "Ok..." I was still in shock of over the information I was given about 30 minutes ago. And basically, I was a lifeless dummy for the rest of the day and even when I woke up the following morning. I couldn't stop thinking about it. Just a whole bunch of words and phrases passing through my thoughts all at once. Today, in all my classes, I couldn't stop staring at each of them, with a confused look on my face with my jaw down. It seemed so crazy to me. And of course, soon enough, it came time for me to have Spanish. I came later than Max so he was already sitting down, and when I entered the classroom, he looked up and smiled at me. I sat down but I didnt look at him. I was looking straight ahead with an "omigosh" expression on my face. "Hey." the voice was Max's, to my right, but I still didn't look in his direction. "Um Nat? Hello?" He waved a hand in front of my face. I didn't even care that he called me Nat, my nickname. So he pushed my face to the side to see him and when he did, he saw my expression and knew exacly what was going on. He didn't get a single word out of the shocked me all class period. After that was lunch and Max walked me to their table, and I plopped down as the rest of the vampires surrounded me. Also, Valerie came. "She's been like that ever since I told her yesterday." Val said and sighed after. Basically, they asked what I wanted to know and suprisingly, I spoke. I also got answers. Then, Val put her arm around Ronnie and said to him "Tell her what you told me." "Oh, yeah. Well, Natalie, soon Val, here...." he also had his arm around her and pulled her a little, "Soon, she's going to be mine."And then they exchanged a kiss and when they pulled out they smiled at eachother and Ronnie looked at me. I knew exacly what that meant. Whoa, hold the chalice! "What!"...................
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Ravenous - Chapter 1_First EncountersWell, I've always been a loner, trying not to conform with the rest of society. And well, sadly, I've only one friend, Valerie. She although had many friends, I, her best. We have a lot in common though so I'm good. Actually, I remember the first time we met, kinda, which was in seventh grade. She sat in front of me in history with her long hair, which always had to on my desk. I wanted to cut it. But we eventually became best buds. But enough about that, this is how the real story all started.
First day of my junior year and I have to admit, I'm not too excited. And going into my classes, which are are boring as ever but, in that first day, I did not fail to notice all the new good-looking guys, which I've never seen before. And I mean GOOD-LOOKING. Actually, I had one in each of my classes! And I am so liking it. In my history class, I have Omar Espinosa. Cute. In my next class, English, I have Robert Ortiz. Cuter. In Math, Bryan Monte. Getting Cuter. In my spanish class, Max Green, and wow, he is gorgeous! And lastly, in my science class, i have Ronnie Radke, hot, and Craig Mabbit, um not so hot....or cute for that matter. The second day, at lunch, I noticed that they all sat together, except Craig. He sat by himself staring at them from across the room, making an angry face. When I got a good look at Ronnie's table I noticed that they seem to have a really good connection, as if they've known eachother for years.
Later, in Spanish, we were put into groups, and I've been paired with Max! My heart is beating like crazy, I feel like it's going to rip through my chest and as I picked up my hands off my desk, they tremble. That's what happens to me. So Max comes to the emtpy seat next to me and plops down his bag next to the chair. And he says "Hey, I'm Max." and extends his hand out for me to shake. Wow, I think I just had a heart attack! Think, Natalie! Think words! "Uh.......Natalie." And shook his hand. He smiled and said "I'm new here." "Oh. Cool. Uhhh.....so how do u like it...here?" It's pretty cool..." He said as he look around the room. "..I guess." And he flashed another one of his great smiles. And I melted inside. Sadly, for the remainder of class we actually had to concentrate on our work. I swear that teacher wouldn't take her eyes off of us!
It was lunch again and Val had come to our table and she had a very happy look on her face. "Hey, Nat, do you know Ronnie Radke?" "Yeah, he's in my science class. Why?" "Well...he asked me out!" And she squealed. "We've really gotten to know eachother the past few days." She said before I could respond to her her first statement. "Cool." And right after I said that, Ronnie walked by and stopped at our table. "Hey." He said, looking at her then at me. Then he sat down, intriged by my presence and asked "What's your name?" "Natalie." "Huh, sounds familiar, do you know my bud, Max?" And he pointed across the room to Max, who wasn't looking in our direction. "Oh yeah, I have Spanish with him." Wait! How come I have no problem talking to Ronnie but I do with Max!? "Cool. Wait, I also have um...science with you, don't I?" I nodded and he got up, told Valerie that he'd see her later and left to his table.
After about a week later, dates for Val and Ronnie, and some fun times with Max in Spanish, I invited Val to come over again after school. Since we were neighbors we just walked down or up the street to eachothers houses. This was a regular thing for us. Also, whoever was coming had to bring along their guitar and amp. Our Favorite thing to do was to play Escape the Fate and rock out. She plays lead and I play bass. This week, she wanted to tell me about her good times with Ronnie. " Natalie, I have to tell you something!" She had a very serious but excited look on her face.........
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